W.A.L.T. I am learning to write a descriptive recount including an introduction and an conclusion
When I walked in to the hospital room I saw my dad sitting down watching TV. It was a joy seeing him because he had leukaemia and had to stay in the hospital. This was father's day in 2002 the year before he past away.
He looked well when we saw him and was happy to see us. He looked overjoyed when he saw our presents, they were framed pictures from me and Jake that we did at Queens High Preschool, there was also a family picture that we took of Me, Jake, Mum and Dad. Jake read a book called "Dad And Me" he got from the St Clair School library Jake thought that it would be a good book to get for father's day.
The last thing I remember on that fathers day was saying goodbye and as we got ready to say goodbye we cannot give him a kiss or else we might of got sick, so we gave him a hug and wave goodbye as we walked out of the hospital room.
My dad is my hero even though he's gone he was the best father I could ever have and I will remember him by...
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Fathers Day
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W.A.L.T. I am learning to write a descriptive recount including an introduction and an conclusion
When I walked in to the hospital room I saw my dad sitting down watching TV. It was a joy seeing him because he had leukaemia and had to stay in the hospital. This was father's day in 2002 the year before he past away.
He looked well when we saw him and was happy to see us. He looked overjoyed when he saw our presents, they were framed pictures from me and Jake that we did at Queens High Preschool, there was also a family picture that we took of Me, Jake, Mum and Dad. Jake read a book called "Dad And Me" he got from the St Clair School library Jake thought that it would be a good book to get for father's day.
The last thing I remember on that fathers day was saying goodbye and as we got ready to say goodbye we cannot give him a kiss or else we might of got sick, so we gave him a hug and wave goodbye as we walked out of the hospital room.
My dad is my hero even though he's gone he was the best father I could ever have and I will remember him by...
By Brenna
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